I'm not a fan of pics 1 and 3, but I really like pic 2.
Pic 1: There's something about the lighting that's off here. I'm not very good at photography, but I think it's the sharp contrast between the light and shadow. I'm not a fan of the expression you're going for either, but that may just be me.
Pic 2: I think this pic is great. It looks a little out of focus, but otherwise fine. Nice clothes, solid photography, natural and unstaged, social proof photo, etc.
Pic 3: Pretty underwhelming. You're right, the outfit is shit, and I think that's my biggest criticism.
IMO you're an attractive dude, keep taking more photos and you'll get some really good ones.
Also, Secret Hitler is a fantastic game. Love it.